Aanaya has been really using her vivid imagination. She has written two super cool stories. The first one she wrote is called 'An Unexpected Adventure.' This is based on the photo of the girl in the bathtub which was one of the writing activities last week. The second story Aanaya called 'Up the Tree,' this story was based on the photo of the bear up the tree with an umbrella. Aanaya and her mum had heaps of fun imagining all sorts of scary, funny and silly stories that could fit these pictures. Aanaya loved the idea that since it's her story, she could decide what happened to the characters. Isn't that exciting! Aanaya was inspired by home learning TV, so she decided to read out one of her stories just like they do on TV.
I am so proud of the work you have done Aanaya. I absolutely loved watching your video. Maybe one day you will be a presenter on TV and I can tell people I was your teacher once upon a time!
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Wow you really sound ready for TV Aanaya!! I can not believe you wrote this story this is incredible!!!! I love how you use all these cool feeling words like worried and how you used the words 'something unexpected happened'. Seriously incredible work Aanaya!
ReplyDeleteAanaya I loved seeing your video it was so awesome! I wonder when TVNZ will call you to be one of their presenters. The words you wrote in your story were spectacular - What an amazing writer you are!! I would love to hear you read out your other story!!
ReplyDeleteWhat outstanding work! This is brilliant. A great piece of writing, using some really interesting words and telling a great story. Then you have read it so well, with great expression. I am going to play for my son! Keep up the amazing work!
ReplyDeleteWoohoo! Aanaya! What a story you wrote and what a way you presented it! You are Little Miss Incredible, I think.Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteWow Aanaya, the descriptive language you have used in this story. You have me hooked in all the way through. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteAanaya, I loved watching your video presentation. You spoke like an expert presenter with confidence and spoke clearly. It's a powerful reporting, Aanaya! You are an excellent writer as well. What a great story you wrote. Fantastic work, Aanaya!
ReplyDeleteHi i'm simeli from whakamana going home and gona have cookis and milk and leson to your story
ReplyDeletekeep it up