Aroha has been busy again with her home learning. For writing, she chose to write procedural writing on 'How to Make a Ham and Cheese Sandwich. Aroha, your instructions were clear, and I could follow them easily. You remembered to start your instruction with the action words. Well done, great work, Aroha! I love your cupcake. It looks deliciously colourful!
Aroha has been busy again with her home learning. For writing, she chose to write procedural writing on 'How to Make a Ham and Cheese Sandwich. Aroha, your instructions were clear, and I could follow them easily. You remembered to start your instruction with the action words. Well done, great work, Aroha! I love your cupcake. It looks deliciously colourful!
Hi Aroha. What a busy girl you are! I think your cupcake looks delicious and would be lovely with a coffee! Well done for completing your procedural writing activity and using bossy verbs. Keep up the wonderful work Aroha:)
ReplyDeleteAroha, you continue to work really hard in your bubble. It is so amazing to me to see how far your writing has come, it is incredible! I really like your daffodil picture too, ka pai!
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