Maddison did an amazing job of writing and then reading her story. I love the descriptive language you used Maddison. You really did create a picture in my mind - that is what great writers do! Keep up the great work!!!
This year we are doing phonics in our homerooms. Kiwi class looks at two letters and their matching sounds every week. Weka and Pukeko classes work together on one letter of the week. Each week we have a letter of the week wall where we display all the things we can find that begin with our letter of the week. Last week our letter was H and we had some fun having Harlin Haines wearing a hat on our h wall. Too cute not to share! This week our letter is J so get your thinking caps on Weka and Pukeko classes, what words do you know that start with J?
What fantastic work Maddison! Your story really creates an image in my head I love the fabulous language that you use, like when you said that you did a 180 and your foot got caught. It really painted a picture in my head! Fantastic work Maddison :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic piece of writing Maddison. I love that language you use to paint a picture for the reader/listener. Keep up the amazing work little Maddison Cummins the writer!
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ReplyDeleteIt is Miss Waho here having a look at the amazing learning that Te Ara Whakatau students have been doing.
Maddison, I love this piece of writing. Your expression when you read make sit easy to listen to and your language is fantastic and interesting. What a great story. Well done for learning from home and sharing what you have done with us all.
Ka pai.