Maddison did an amazing job of writing and then reading her story. I love the descriptive language you used Maddison. You really did create a picture in my mind - that is what great writers do! Keep up the great work!!!
Te Ara Whakatau - Junior Hub Year 0-2 students at Gilberthorpe School.
What fantastic work Maddison! Your story really creates an image in my head I love the fabulous language that you use, like when you said that you did a 180 and your foot got caught. It really painted a picture in my head! Fantastic work Maddison :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic piece of writing Maddison. I love that language you use to paint a picture for the reader/listener. Keep up the amazing work little Maddison Cummins the writer!
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ReplyDeleteIt is Miss Waho here having a look at the amazing learning that Te Ara Whakatau students have been doing.
Maddison, I love this piece of writing. Your expression when you read make sit easy to listen to and your language is fantastic and interesting. What a great story. Well done for learning from home and sharing what you have done with us all.
Ka pai.